i. Parallel tangents
never touch. Angles and chords
I watch his hands move.
ii. An infection, you
are inside my cells, lovely
and lysogenic.
iii. His expression says
‘meiosis.’ I walk away
haploid and lonely.















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Nice work.
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It ought to be illegal for an artist to marry. If the artist must marry let him find someone more interested in art, or his art, or the artist part of him, than in him. After which let them take tea together three times a week.
xo!
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always waiting. always.
Yeah, you've got some pretty cool uses of scientific concepts in poetry. I never thought they could be used this way (maybe I'll pay more attention in science class after this!). And you definitely got the feeling, especially since all this terminology reminds me of school, and that's where teen romance usually begins and all.
Geek is cool. *nods furiously* I'm considered a geek like half the time too. And technology is awesome, as long as we don't use it to send nuclear missiles to blow up the whole planet into smithereens.
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always waiting. always.
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